WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 01/05/2013 #8sunday #snippetsunday

On January 5, 2014, Posted by , In Snippet,WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday, With 12 Comments

seizeBeen writing in Seize again.  Hopefully, I’ll start getting on a roll again.  I love when I get on a writing binge.

The last he remembered before he drifted off himself was her staring off into the distance, arms around her knees as she rocked and keened gently in the night.  He’d wanted to hold her, comfort her, but knew his touch would be no comfort at all.

Now, the sounds and bright colors of the market lifted his spirit higher than they’d been in days.  David energetically squirmed, demanding to be let off the horse.  Amara got down and obliged him.  Turning to him, she said, “Thank you for your aid.”

“It is my honor, ma’am,” he said, bowing to her slightly.  He felt bad that there was nothing he could do to heal her wounds.

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12 Comments so far:

  1. Sherry Gloag says:

    Very emotive snippet, I’ll have to read back to previous posts.

  2. Gemma Parkes says:

    I enjoyed this snippet and the emotions running through it from both characters. You painted a believable scene full of depth.

  3. Good emotional scene allowing the reader to feel for both of them.

  4. I like this story, I love all three characters and I feel so sad for him, that he can’t help her. Yet. I’m sure there will be Developments. Excellent excerpt!

  5. Is he leaving here here?

  6. P.T. Wyant says:

    I really love the emotion in the first paragraph.

  7. Millie Burns says:

    Are they parting ways???? Augh, not yet!

  8. elainecsc2013 says:

    Nice emotions here.

  9. Marcia says:

    This excerpt is very clear, and I really feel like I’m right there with them. I don’t know these characters but I’m really curious and a little worried about what’s going to happen next!

  10. Eleri Stone says:

    Aw, his concern for her is so touching.

  11. Kate Warren says:

    He seems like a nice guy. I hope they meet again.

  12. Oh, why is he leaving them here?

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