WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 07/21/2013 #8sunday #snipsun

Hope you guys are enjoying the story thus far.  Here’s the next installment…

“I’m David!”

I’d screamed at finding myself no longer alone, falling off the cot they’d seen fit to give me.  “How did you get in here?”

He’d shrugged and pointed at a small hole at the bottom of the wall.  “I don’t think these cells were made for kids.”  Apparently not, I’d thought dryly.  My sarcasm had reached epic proportions during my weeks of imprisonment.  It didn’t help that I was accustomed to far better treatment in general.


18 Comments so far:

  1. burnsmillie says:

    Aw, “I don’t think these cells were made for kids…” What’s that little sweetie doing in a cell? Poor baby!

  2. P.T. Wyant says:

    I love how easy-going and matter-of-fact he is!

  3. So interesting, raises all kinds of questions, can’t wait to see what develops next. Excellent excerpt.

  4. Am certainly curious about the “new kid” and to find out what happens. Nice suspense.

  5. Karysa Faire says:

    Sounds really interesting–is the person relating something that happened to him/her in the past? I’ll definitely be back next week for more.

  6. Nice snippet! The poor little guy, but he’s sharp, for sure! I like his pluck 🙂

  7. Interesting snippet. I’m curious about the newbie. 🙂
    ~ Skye

  8. Kids in a cell. Yikes! Worse than being sent to your room without a book!

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